Every successful business is the product of hard work and a fine sense of judgment. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that the management colleges are the best platform to learn about business while others emphasize different methods of learning about business.
Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that studying a business course in universities is the best way to learn about business operations and have many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost is required formal learning from management institutions which is more fruitful. Plus, it is more required for the company and expansion growth. Secondly, it is a cakewalk for finance students to manage finances in a company. Thirdly, a master’s in business administration might increase sales by theoretical knowledge of marketing.
On the other hand, some believe that there are other ways to learn about business operations for myriad reasons. Chiefly, experience is one of the effective ways for self-learning about business operations which can be done in multiple organizations. To exemplify, the story of an Indian bull in the stock market named “Harshad Mehta” who earlier had to learn about stocks and trading in his stockbroker job through many firms. Later he established a successful trading consultant firm under his supervision which came from his real-life exposures while working as a stockbroker in the industry. Furthermore, imbibing work culture and ethics is required to build a brand name in the industry.
In my profound opinion, although a formal education is required to manage a business administration, the industry knowledge is more challenging as many unpredictable situations require great problem-solving skills which come from industry experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
...to manage finances in a company Thirdly a masters in business administration might increa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ills which come from industry experience
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45714285714 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03782279716 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 280.0 20.2975951904 1379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1528.0 106.682146367 1432% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 280.0 20.7667163134 1348% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 107.0 7.06120827912 1515% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353676021951 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.353676021951 0.084324248473 419% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204764761848 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973671032002 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 144.3 13.0946893788 1102% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -229.64 50.2224549098 -457% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 114.8 11.3001002004 1016% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.87 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.04 8.58950901804 257% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.0 10.1190380762 1127% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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