Development of technologies led to plenty of alternations in numerous spheres including education.That is why,nowadays students prefer studying online rather than in educational premises.This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is the rapid gain of eyes issues amongst pupils and also submit rising price on web studying as the most viable solution.
Schooling via Internet demands hours sitting in front of a computer that accounts for impaired vision.In other words,excessive pressure on eyes worsens their functioning inspite of unparalleled conveniences.Because long-term eye strain people consequently tend to wear glasses whenever they want to see satisfactionally.In short,if it is ought to remain vision well,time spent with devices should be reduced.
The possible solution of this problem is to make traditional way of study more affordable and reduce online classes by increasing worth on it.Making educating via Internet inaccessible will trigger millions of students to attend lesdons in a campus.This,however,does not mean that online lessons will disappear completely.,whereas it would diminish users of that system.Clearly, by establishing high cost on online education students will not be interested in getting knowledge online.
In conclusion,despite benefits of online schools, it has daunting consequence as eyes diseases.The best solution that ,could be taken is an enhancing prices on this type of educating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, in short, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93896713615 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77819070886 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699530516432 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.739373097 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.25 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.25 20.7667163134 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 7.06120827912 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211331447495 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110647046502 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810349287508 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110647046502 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810349287508 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 13.0946893788 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.06 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.12 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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