Every year several language die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.
Language is very important for communication. Some people believe that extinction of language make life more easy. I completely disagree with this idea, and I discuss this statement in upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, in my idea language is very important for our culture, and we can't separate language from culture. For example, in Farsi, when we read a poem from one of our famous poets, Hafez, it is much more meaningful than reading it in another language. I think each country's language is like a key to open their cultural door and communicate much better with people. So removing languages doesn't make life easier it makes it difficult.
secoundly It is clear that we speak with our parents with our mother tongue, and it makes communication easy for us. If our mother tongue dies out, it will be very hard for our parents and old generation to learn it and it causes misunderstandings and it is hard for them to express their feelings. The extinction of any language hurts the older generation and makes life hard for them.
To sum up, each language has worth culture and instead of removing it, we all should try to teach it to foreigners and show them how our generations spoke. It is crucial to encourage our children to speak with their mother's tongue. In this modern world, it is also necessary for us to learn other languages to improve our communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81012658228 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75840957298 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8823493328 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6923076923 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230195289727 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978914737842 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563430927269 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167150360059 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912105416623 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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