Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion.
In recent time it is not uncommon to see that some minority language pass away whereas others become more broadly spoken. This essay agrees that this is positive trend which leads to better understand people each other. Firstly, this essay will discuss how easier will be traveling and secondly, the essay will look at wider opportunity to study overseas due to reduce language barrier.
Nowadays people travel around the world for doing business as well as for holiday. As languages such as English, Spanish or Chinese become more widely used there will be easer for humans organise their trip. If in the world were only few languages people would understand themselves without any problem and traveling become more comfortable for most people. For example, problem with misunderstanding on airport would not exist at all. Moreover, businessmen will be able to extend their business and their work will be easier due to the fact that they avoid communications problem with overseas clients and subcontractors.
In addition, young people who want to study at the best university namely Harvard, Oxford would have focus their attention on sciences because problem with study subject in foreign language would not exist for them. In this way overseas students can better understanding tutor and improve their knowledge wider and dipper.
In conclusion, declining amount of language in the world should be seen as a positive aspect due to the fact that average people can avoid to be misunderstand and their live become easier. This trend brings numerous advantages for business and science as well.
- You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 61
- You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell them where you would like to live. Tell them the type of place you are looking for. 56
- You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. 78
- You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 61
- You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... English, Spanish or Chinese become more widely used there will be easer for huma...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... overseas clients and subcontractors. In addition, young people who want to st...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... their knowledge wider and dipper. In conclusion, declining amount of languag...
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Line 13, column 134, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid being'.
Suggestion: avoid being
...due to the fact that average people can avoid to be misunderstand and their live become eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25968992248 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60277017721 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2807705448 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240913032795 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921682615334 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479927595955 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156789982635 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539331046641 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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