Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
'Health is gold" is a conventional option of ancestors. In fact, without good health, you can not do anything. Therefore, everyone should have a balanced diet as well as a limit to eat meat containing a lot of fat content and negative impacts. I completely with this viewpoint that individuals should adopt a vegetarian diet
Undoubtedly, there are numerous benefits of a vegetarian diet. To begin with, vegetarianism can help us stay away from many diseases. Because it not only consists of a variety of vitamins but also provides a dozen of nutrients for the body, all of which contribute to build up a resistance to viruses and bacteria. For example, many resident living on Honshu island in Japan has a life- expectancy by just adjusting a vegetarian diet to get by. Therefore, the majority of scientists clearly state that human-being should consume a vegetarian food
The other reason is that a vegetarian diet helps people more mobility and to be full of beans by limiting fat contents and cholesterol. For instance, half of the doctors across the world have already proved that people eating vegetarian food live happier and longer than people eating non-vegetarian food. Furthermore, these veggies will have to maintain positive mental health to create an active lifestyle for working and relaxing
In conclusion, I strongly agree that individuals should get used to eating a vegetarian diet which will help people healthier to try their best in studying and working
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05668016194 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9281136863 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7946522152 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258698952635 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924123934595 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595512694826 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155612876767 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058564599401 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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