Most of the ailments stem from an unhealthy diet and inappropriate food behavior. When it is perfectly possible to lead a healthy life by eating plant-based food, I see no justification for killing birds and animals for preparing our food. I absolutely agree with the argument that everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet.
It can be found a cascade of rational virtues to follow a vegetarian diet. To begin with, fruits and vegetables are rich in vitamins, minerals and anti-oxidants and other nutrients required our body for a healthy life. Plants contain little or no calories, fat and cholesterol, thus their consumption does not lead to obesity, cancer and heart disease. pursuing a vegetarian diet not only accrue benefits to human but also prevent from slaying and oppressing to animals and stop it.
Yet another axiomatic argument is that fish and meat are full of calories and cholesterol. Regular consumption of red meat is known to increase the risk of heart trouble and blood pressure. What's more, the quality of non-vegetarian foods has also deteriorated in over the years. It is undeniable fact that farm animals are given steroid which can increase their growth. by eating their meat, steroid enters our body and cause serious problems like precocious puberty in children. In addition, most of the food poisoning is owing to the consumption of contaminated meat or seafood which is the result of invading to the oceans by humankind.
To conclude, according to the pros mentioned above, everyone not only for sake of having a healthy lifestyle but stopping the oppression of animals should accept a vegetarian diet and become vegetarianism.
- These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 78
- Some physiologist recommented that it is important to overcome stress by spending time do nothing To what extend do you agree or disagree 79
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this? 78
- Some people think that the government should not give international aid since they have disadvantaged people like unemployment and homeless in their country To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- In many nations many people in huge cities either live alone or in small units instead of in large extended family groups Why is this Is a positive or negative development 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14760147601 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90787551002 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1079506306 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203212194056 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716557006687 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793320505949 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120611802889 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224030140053 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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