Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population's sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is overwhelming evidence that consuming a limitless measure of sugar is a distinctive reason of the medicinal problems. As a result, a continuing controversy has arisen over what is the primary reason behind this dilemma. While some people attribute it to the government to monopolize the excesses of sugar in local trades, others would contend that it is people who are in charge of this beyond exceeding of sugar in their regimes. I strongly believe that people play a pivotal role in their health food.
Many groups of people believe that the government has a great deal of power and influence over the administrative system to regulate applicable rules strictly to tackle this worrying trend. For example, the government has a huge amount of impact over the markets to increase tariffs on sugar imports. Besides, it can also control over access to sugar by levying taxes on production. It suggested that the government should expand its educational infrastructure. Then raise the awareness of people, especially children, and adolescents, through media education programs to reduce purchase an ample amount of sugar. If the government educates people in terms of the detrimental effect of eating the amount of sugar on their health, definitely they will tend to quit it in the blink of an eye.
Contrary to popular belief, people should change their attitudes about sugar overuse and change their eating habits. Countless scientific studies although have confirmed that a diet deficient in a shortage of sugar maysignificantly impact on one's brain activity, other studies shed light on how the increasing sugar in daily intake can raise blood pressure and diabetes in people. Therefore, people have to control daily sugar levels in their diet.
In my opinion, people have to cut down on the amount of sugar they eat every day. Overall, every single person is responsible for protecting their health.
There is overwhelming evidence that consuming a limitless measure of sugar is a distinctive reason of the medicinal problems. As a result, a continuing controversy has arisen over what is the primary reason behind this dilemma. While some people attribute it to the government to monopolize the excesses of sugar in local trades, others would contend that it is people who are in charge of this beyond exceeding of sugar in their regimes. I strongly believe that people play a pivotal role in their health food.
Many groups of people believe that the government has a great deal of power and influence over the administrative system to regulate applicable rules strictly to tackle this worrying trend. For example, the government has a huge amount of impact over the markets to increase tariffs on sugar imports. Besides, it can also control over access to sugar by levying taxes on production. it suggested that the government should expand its educational infrastructure. Then raise the awareness of people, especially children, and adolescents, through media education programs to reduce purchase an ample amount of sugar. If the government educates people in terms of the detrimental effect of eating the amount of sugar on their health, definitely they will tend to quit it in the blink of an eye.
Contrary to popular belief, people should change their attitudes about sugar overuse and change their eating habits. Countless scientific studies although have confirmed that a diet deficient in a shortage of sugar maysignificantly impact on one's brain activity, other studies shed light on how the increasing sugar in daily intake can raise blood pressure and diabetes in people. Therefore people have to control daily sugar levels in their diet.
In my opinion, people have to cut down on the amount of sugar they eat every day. Overall, every single person is responsible for protecting their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2064516129 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78774634008 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5539939728 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0152879786936 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00506400517623 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0115819120216 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0100944845586 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121404731089 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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