In the age of technological advancement, Facebook is rapidly dominating the entire time spent of our lives as a result of remarkable benefits. An important controversy centering on how Facebook minute by minute becoming indispensable concerns potential threats put on our lives. In my perspective, I wholeheartedly agree that Facebook brings out several negative impacts besides noticeably positive factors.
First and foremost, Facebook enhances the high risk of personal information invasion. In reality, there are many instances of infringement of privacy, such as location information, relationship, bank account, etc., due to the poor security of Facebook. As a result, this unacceptable act can drive a human into anxiety disorder or depression, thus harming their health, not to mention the risk of financial loss.
Secondly, Facebook drives people to be inactive, isolate themselves in their own homes every time they are free. As far as I am aware, people use Facebook at least 8 hours per day, so most of us are riveted on Facebook chatting, watching funny videos without concerning the time spent in place of physical activities to improve health. Worryingly, this can lead people to be more isolated and suffer both physical health problems related to eyes, bones and mental disorders such as depression. According to recent research, children increasingly have difficulty in communication because of overusing Facebook.
In contrast, some may argue that if we are not using Facebook 24/24, we can not keep up to date with news on the world. I concede that Facebook keeps us informed of the rapid changes of the world. However, using it all day long can bring about detrimental effects on mental abilities and working capacity. As we have our eyes glued on Facebook all day, many distractors can interupt our attention span and we hardly catch up with working or studying tasks.
In conclusion, I am convinced that it is true that Facebook inflicts so much harm on our lives. The low security of Facebook can enable hackers or intruders to violate our personal information. Besides, Facebook can lead us to isolated lives and reduce mental abilities and working capacity as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and working capacity as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31444759207 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94526026311 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611898016997 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0189271611 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169215459835 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531618427926 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311313217092 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929073824191 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323179696271 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.