Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that education tax should not be charged to families whose children go to private schools. This essay totally disagrees with the statement because it would be wrong to reduce taxes for people who don’t opt for public school and the education system will suffer due to a shortage of funds.
Firstly, it is morally incorrect to exempt people who don’t send their kids to a government-funded education center. This is to say that the government never forces anyone to educate their child in a private institution; it is parents who willingly prefer them to pay a higher fee. All state-aided school provides equal opportunity for learning to all students without any discrimination. If they are excused, then it would be difficult for the government to manage the education system. Besides, double standard taxation will create an outcry among the population.
Secondly, the exemption would lead to low revenue generation, which will result in less amount of funds being allocated for the education sector, and the learning system will collapse. Therefore, it is important to contribute to tax to maintain a higher standard of leaning. This will benefit the affluent class because they will be able to recruit a well-educated workforce, and in turn will have more productivity and prosperous nation. For instance, company owners will be able to hire a well-educated person and competent staff which can only happen if the public education system is well funded.
In conclusion, I do not believe any financial concessions should be given to families who opt for private education because it would be not correct, and a decline in funding will affect the learning system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unding will affect the learning system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88615962056 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4453679925 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303843868848 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116320303398 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795262583215 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213700693231 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827332260012 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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