Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs – that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary and should be implement whenever possible.To what extend do you agree with this?

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Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs – that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary and should be implement whenever possible.

To what extend do you agree with this?

In modern society, many kind of agricultural products have been imported from other nations. Therefore, it creates an intense competition between domestic producers and foreign producers that governments have made rules to protect their own farmers. In my opinion, these policies rarely should be applied, only when they are a real inevitability.

To begin with, people can easily realize that they have to pay more money to have the same quality goods. Seeking for all over the world, importers can find out various products which are similar to domestic products, but they must pay taxes for the government to bring food from the outsides. So the price is a combination of own goods’ value and the tax. For instance, the government of Vietnam taxes a lot on imported cars. Consequently, they cost three times as much as their original prices. Of course, customers really feel uncomfortable with this result.

To have a view in long-term, tariffs can make national agriculture become weaker with every passing day. The purpose of tariffs is domestic agriculture protection, and the government uses them as a possible solution. However, it is just an immediate barrier, and not only it doesn`t enhance strength of national agriculture, but also it makes farmers neglect their duties. For example, farmers familiar with help of the government, they still can sell goods without quality concern. Gradually, they almost lose an effort to produce high quality products and give up their competition with foreign rivals.

To sum up, these special taxes are just short-term solutions, the governments should let economic move normally. Without tariffs, farmers must keep their effort to develop domestic agriculture.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
In modern society, many kind of agricultural products have been impo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, of course, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39338235294 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79364353563 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7038812671 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134528725873 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442933530657 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249138145589 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082228538243 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00849246775402 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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