Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it

Nowadays, young people are not interested to choose to farm as a profession. While agriculture is the backbone of every country. This easy will mention the reasons why the young generation has reduced interest in this agriculture releam.
There are Some factors that contribute to the lack of interest in farming and one of them is the instability of climatic conditions. Nowadays, there are vast changes in climatic seasons like heavy rainfall that leads to flood which demolishes all crops at the time of harvest. Another factor is the lack of education in farming. children should be taught in school from childhood regarding farming and its techniques which develop their interest in. In addition, a lack of incentives has to be provided by the government. Farming is a financially lucrative activity. The farmers cannot afford to purchase any advanced equipment which is needed for doing farming methods which leads to a lack of interest in farming.
There are some solutions for this that the government has to come up with various schemes and methods for the improvement of agriculture which supports the farmers. Education should be introduced in the school curriculum about the importance and role of farmers in nation-building. The government should contribute subsidies to farmers. moreover, insurance coverage should be given to protect farmers if there is any crop failure like natural calamities. Farmers should be educated about modern techniques of farming. To achieve equipment government should arrange the loan facilities to ease farmers life. Incontrast, the government must offer minimum price on all crops.
To conclude, we cannot allow the farming practices to disappear, we can educate and motivate the upcoming generation to choose to farm as a career for own country and also for good environment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sted to choose to farm as a profession. While agriculture is the backbone of every co...
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Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...or is the lack of education in farming. children should be taught in school from childho...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...should contribute subsidies to farmers. moreover, insurance coverage should be given to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, as to, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30689655172 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89611860473 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9563732175 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143386967871 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442469879065 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426684280109 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965436925501 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512160037116 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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