In this modern life, fast food has become love for food that people prefer having it even in their mealtime. It seems that there are many pros and cons eating fastfood, but to some extent it is beneficial. It is advantageous as it tastes good and easily available. While on the other hand, it effects on a person's health and it becomes habituated.
Mostly, People who wants to stay away from boring food like pulses and grains are fond of having junk food. As fast food tastes delicious and doesn't makes one to eat food that you dislike. Also, it is readily available within a short span of time. Be it you want to prepare it yourself or to make an order, it takes very less time to reach at your doorstep. There are number of restaurants providng fast food and ready to cook meals are easily available in the markets. For example, a newspaper report shows that 80 percent of people love fast food rather than main course for its taste.
Although, fast food is preferred for its taste or time taken to cook, besides it is not a healthy option for an individual. The problems associated with having fast food is its avaialble oils and fats and way the food is processed. All these adds to a person's health suffering in digestion problems which might result into a disease. And also some people becomes habituated having the same kind of food always. Most of the people reports to hospital complaining about stomach pain and constipation problems after having junk food .
To conclude that, at this mordern times people have put their lives at risk by having too much fast food as it is yummy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, while, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59440559441 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32795902419 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5817728828 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275190695786 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909355399289 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802025328972 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171446689467 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381474804473 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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