With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays because of the hectic schedule people tend to move towards the fast food as the main course of the meal. In my view this has a more disadvantages than the benefits. I will illustrate the points based on my view in the following paragraphs with supporting reasons.

Firstly, we see obesity as a major problem among most of the people and the main reason behind this is eating at the fast food centers frequently. In the modern life style both the husband and wife are working and they do not get enough time to cook some times and they rely on the fast food restaurants. Also, I have personally seen many of my friends who are staying away from family due to their work and other reasons having food outside rather than cooking for themselves because of the busy schedules in office. Thus, it is leading to obesity of the people.

Moreover, there are many health related issues which people get due to this habit of eating fast food rather than having the hygienic food which is cooked at home. I personally experienced this situation when I was admitted to the hospital as I was habituated eating at the fast food centers regularly and this damaged my digestive system. Hence, I believe that having food at the these centers leads to serious problems.

In conclusion, I would say that there are more disadvantages than advantages because of eating at the fast food centers. However, It is fine to have it occasionally due to the fact that people are occupied most of the time with some or the other work.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...y of the people. Moreover, there are many health related issues which people get due to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65555555556 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47281238621 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525925925926 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.07522054 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267785430439 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986550282552 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691273801689 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174747177556 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423818446382 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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