These days, the majority of people are not entertaining their leisure time as much as past. The root causes of a hobbyless lifestyle and its impacts on other aspects of people and society are the concerns in each community.
Having a hobby requires sufficient free time in your schedule to regularly participate in an activity of your choice. However, nowadays, most people are busy with work, family, commuting, etc., leaving little time for leisure activities. For example, when I was a student, I used to play football with my friends 3 times a week because I had plenty of spare time that let me have some fun. Nevertheless, now, a busy working schedule and long commuting times have made it impossible to schedule any hobby. Furthermore, engaging in leisure activities has become expensive and out of reach for many people.
I believe in the long term, this can drastically damage an individual’s mental health and consequently affect the whole society negatively. Hobbies distract our thoughts from unpleasant issues and give us a feeling of relief, on the opposite side without them life would become extremely boring and depressing. For example, I usually arrive home too tired to do anything but rest for the next work day. Despite a good night's sleep, my mind remains exhausted. On the other hand, there is a belief that only a happy man can create happiness in others. Thus, undoubtedly, not only unhappy members cannot help each other but they might even degrade others' happiness.
In conclusion, as a matter of fact, there is a direct relationship between entertainment and happiness. Thus, people's less amusement due to their busy life and also costly entertainment would lead them towards an unhappy lifestyle and consequently society.
- You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems Write a letter to your new employer In your letter explain your situationdescribe your problemstell him her when you think you can start 73
- tpo 31 75
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet Do you agree or disagree 56
- TPO 49 76
- Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07612456747 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82543697013 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657439446367 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8158906778 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154616399924 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440391703924 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387976298103 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760062204985 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408242944341 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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