It is observed that for survival in today's fast-paced life, people stay connected with there jobs and study. Their priorities have been shifted from happiness to earning monetary facilities. Surely, a set of people think that now a few people are involved in what they actually like to do, or in short their hobbies. In this essay, the few factors responsible for this situation, and their effects on personalities and civilization will be discussed.
To commence with, from antiquity several forms of art and craft been developed, it takes adequate time to develop mastery in one form and make it fruitful. Hence, to be successful in life people believe that instead of investing time in these recreational activities, they can learn the skill which can provide them respectable positions in cooperate offices. Additionally, hobbies some time cannot bring financial help to the individual, thus, to deal with livelihood, they forbid hobbies and look for beneficial opportunities. In a recent piece of article by prominent "The Times", around sixty percent of the population could not able to continue their leisure activity due to lack of resources. Consequently, this void remains with them through the length of their life.
Firstly, there could be many detrimental effects lie on the individuals, hobbies provide a relaxing pastime when people can ignore their daily stress and perplexion by focusing on their favorite activity. Secondly, a plethora of ventures related to these sidelines could open new dimensions of occupations like music, sports, dancing, gaming, adventure, wildlife, and many more. However, there are many activities could also help the society like planting trees, giving education and social work, which suffer because of monetary mindset. In an empirical survey conducted by Londo's "Oxford University", ascertained that seventy percent of successful people in any field have their hobby as their work. Certainly, their happiness reflects the attitude towards their passion.
To conclude, lack of resources, time-consuming to learn a specific skill and no monetary help from hobbies are the few driving forces because of which people are forbidding them. It is inevitable to just ignore the psychological and social impact of this on socitey and individuals, due to increase of stress, anxity and pressure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew dimensions of occupations like music, sports, dancing, gaming, adventure, wild...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47397260274 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95072944854 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594520547945 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7507484963 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162474594843 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545071775877 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435032080607 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110079961095 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462896591712 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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