Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in concern of my dissatisfaction with your airline service. I was travelling on flight VIS087 from Delhi to Bangalore to attend a company seminar on 17th of February, with seat number A05.
When we reached the airport at 10.00 am, it was told us that our luggage could be collected from belt B5. I waited around the belt about forty-five minutes but my luggage was not there. In confusion I contacted one of your staff members then he said it should be there in a few minutes, but even after a few minutes I had no clue about it. When I asked again he said I have to register a complaint, if the luggage was misplaced. I got nervous because the next day I had my meeting and related documents were there with clothes in the luggage, it was of 12" in size, brown in colour and leather make. I asked for some prompt action but staff workers were not serious about it and this whole process took two more hours, finally, I registered a complaint with "CIRP456" number and I had to leave without my suitcase from the airport. Somehow managed my meeting too, but was not expecting this kind of irresponsible behaviour with a business class regular customer.
Kindly update me about the status of my complaint in revert of this mail. Also, Kindly confirm the process to receive it. You can connect me on my mentioned contact number which is registered with ticket booking.
Thank you for the anticipation in advance.
Yours Faithfully
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...he luggage, it was of 12' in size, brown in colour and leather make. I asked for some prom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67669172932 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69233831898 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.711904711 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142484155294 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052175245626 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273355329155 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082967417773 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353506506539 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.