You have travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir,
My intention to writing this letter to enquire about the suitcase that I had lost during my journey through your flight AI0067 from Ahmedabad to Mumbai dated 16th July 2016. In absence of prompt revert from your lost/found department on my written complaint, I have been guided to escalate the issue to the senior level.
It so happened that I had travelled through the airbus AI0067, seat no. B4 to attend an important seminar at Mumbai. The flight was late by half an hour due to weather condition which had disturbed my schedule. And, in rush to reach on time, I missed my suitcase in the luggage carrier of the airbus.I realized about my lost luggage once I had reached the venue. Moreover, I had registered a complain on phone to the concern department. My suitcase was accommodated just above my seat. It was of 12" in size , brown in colour and samsonite make. It was bearing my initials BS at the centre of the locks. It was carrying one set of formal clothing ,some stationary and thesis papers which is required to submit for my Phd. qualification by end of the month.
Kindly update me about the status of my complaint in revert of this mail. Also, Kindly confirm the process to receive it from your office. You can connect me on my mentioned contact number which is registered with ticket booking.
Thank you for the anticipation in advance.
Yours Faithfully
Bhumika Suryavanshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...se in the luggage carrier of the airbus.I realized about my lost luggage once I h...
^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d the venue. Moreover, I had registered a complain on phone to the concern department. My ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to the concern department. My suitcase was accommodated just above my seat. It ...
^^
Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bove my seat. It was of 12' in size , brown in colour and samsonite make. It ...
^^
Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: brown
...e my seat. It was of 12' in size , brown in colour and samsonite make. It was bearing my i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...initials BS at the centre of the locks. It was carrying one set of formal clothing...
^^
Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... was carrying one set of formal clothing ,some stationary and thesis papers which ...
^^
Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Qualification
...which is required to submit for my Phd. qualification by end of the month. Kindly update ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273722627737 0.220444632235 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.153284671533 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.036496350365 0.0606518309736 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0255474452555 0.0506257000042 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.105839416058 0.118615021944 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138686131387 0.107062808482 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0620437956204 0.041066498444 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59689381062 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401459854015 0.0385302599488 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0802919708029 0.0714148451538 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0036496350365 0.0191574576366 19% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109489051095 0.00930345855455 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1423.0 1141.60824742 125% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.134020619 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76113360324 5.53046319177 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372469635628 0.284621296913 131% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251012145749 0.211203875043 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.133321485273 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0931174089069 0.0843313296314 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59689381062 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 65.2347114773 62.8969750728 104% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5294117647 16.4300151701 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6510748616 44.7399317507 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7058823529 90.9928171075 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 16.4300151701 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.235294117647 0.613754768223 38% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.09278350515 382% => OK
Readability: 39.6306263396 37.5504026743 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.66666666667 1.13073093955 147% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293834821398 0.331212695627 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0803810922182 0.0927372745006 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0614865318007 0.0736520305886 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495559649779 0.579516596996 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205880080437 0.180689518051 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105608475046 0.122183219658 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544144445484 0.0765303033291 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276578361047 0.211926503985 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112448798397 0.0737400523855 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182555102652 0.203819188451 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057921547631 0.067151250289 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.48453608247 337% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.46696627218 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluation report
and thesis papers which is required to submit for my Phd. qualification by end of the month.
and thesis papers which are required to submit for my Phd. qualifications by the end of the month.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 248 250
No. of Characters: 1123 1200
No. of Different Words: 150 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.968 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.528 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.514 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.127 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.176 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.629 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Why the letter didn't get evaluated by the e-grader?
I am a VIP user and I would like to know to whom I need to contact if facing any issues in services.
Bhumika