Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?
Every animal has an important role in the various food chain on the earth.Hence, The wild animals are also an inevitable aspect of life on the earth. the recent census of forest population depicts around fifty percent decline in the wildlife population which is a serious concern for every country around the world. In this essay, I would like to discuss some of the reasons behind this phenomenon and try to provide some possible measures to reverse the situation.
Specifically, blind logging of forest trees for its wood can be counted as the main cause behind the reduction of wildlife. Loggi...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Need some subClauses starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 1866 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.911 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.515 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.515 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.493 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.122 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
The earth is losing its
The earth is losing its wildlife at an alarming rate, more so in the last half century. Researches have revealed a fifty percent reduction in their population during that period. Several species have gone extinct from the face of the earth and a few endangered animals are on the verge of it.
Primary reason for this acute problem is the explosion of human population. While the number of wild animals is in a sharp decline, humans have grown exponentially. This has resulted in destruction of natural habitats of wildlife. Uncontrolled poaching, upsurge in use of pesticides and chemical fertilizers, industrial pollution etc. have acted as catalysts in aggravating it. Global worming has caused climate change and affected living being adversely.
The immediate need is to arrest deforestation by implementing stern laws. People violating environmental pollution norms should be strictly penalized. Poaching should be considered a severe offence and stringently dealt with. Most countries already have laws against wildlife destruction, but enforcement must improve. farmers should be encouraged to adopt organic cultivation and there should be incentives for that. Above all, people's mindset needs to change to be more compassionate toward animals, and that can be seeded at a young age. Governments should allocate adequate budgets for research and conservation of wildlife. Planting and protecting trees should become a global trend.
We must act before it’s too late. Lack of bio diversity will not only cause aesthetic harm, but also turn this earth to a non-livable planet. As the most intelligent species, mankind have the responsibility to conserve it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
... in the various food chain on the earth.Hence, The wild animals are also an inevitabl...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...inevitable aspect of life on the earth. the recent census of forest population depi...
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Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... In this essay, I would like to discuss some of the reasons behind this phenomenon and try ...
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Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easons behind this phenomenon and try to provide some possible measures to revers...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...skin and other precious organs enforced the endanger of many important animals of the food c...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ited for any wild animal in the forest. If any wild animal found in the town shoul...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249400479616 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.153477218225 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911270983213 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0431654676259 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0215827338129 0.0437548338989 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141486810552 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0743405275779 0.0403226058552 184% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.62509512217 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287769784173 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.129496402878 0.0861772015684 150% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215827338129 0.021408717616 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00479616306954 0.011925033212 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2307.0 1933.35771543 119% => OK
No of words: 379.0 316.048096192 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08707124011 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395778364116 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279683377309 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192612137203 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134564643799 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62509512217 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540897097625 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 60.2883642093 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.95 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3590692316 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.35 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.814263465372 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 46.9183377309 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.13186813187 1.69124875643 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428978791129 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142603495852 0.102741220458 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0797236375887 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561490275388 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108175839679 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183027088844 0.134430193775 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111963038552 0.0742795772207 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434677357126 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0834847638038 0.0638462369009 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304136936765 0.228012699653 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859577777844 0.058150111329 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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