Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think it would be better for the environment and economy if people only eat the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In todays’ era when distance can be bridged in minimum time, people have numerous options of food from around the world. However, a considerate number of people advocate for eating only locally grown food as it benefits not only environment but also economy of the nation. In My opinion I strongly agree that the consumption of native products is far more beneficial financially as well as for environment.
To begin with, there are plethora of reasons for preferring indigenous foodstuff. Firstly, local foods are grown as per the climate and soil of the area, therefore, suits best to the people living in that area. Watermelons, for illustration, grows in hot and humid climate and its consistency is watery, so, it helps in quenching thirst. eating this fruit in snowfall area does not have any advantage.
Secondly, food that are packaged and transported far, loses its freshness and does not provide vital nutrition to body, undoubtedly fresh food always tastes better. Buying local is growing in importance as many people consider their own carbon foot print on the environment. For instance, shipping of Kiwi fruit in refrigerated containers raised a question of how much carbon does that produce.
Finally, farmers earn their bread and butter by selling their own grown crops. If consumers demand changes then it would be difficult for them to cultivate such eatables in existing weather and their livelihood will get drastically affected, which ultimately will be a setback for country’s economic growth.
In conclusion, I would emphasize on the fact that home cultivation benefits outnumber foreign foods. For the betterment of atmosphere as well as the monitory growth of peasants, one must consume seasonal fruits and vegetables.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Eating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31785714286 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86356198552 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3776180676 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250195434239 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736063342246 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703222193349 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123596764115 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797886143399 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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