Though some countries like the United States and India encourage industries to use energy sources such as wind and solar, almost all other countries prefer to employ the energy sources from Fossil Fuels which is extracted from underground mining coals, oil as well as gas. In my point of view, this is a positive development which would avert the scarce of natural energy sources. This essay will explain the view of using renewable energy and demonstrate appropriate instances.
On the first hand, exploiting the energy sources which are basically from the earth's core, affects the inhabitants in various ways. Fundamentally, the needs for these sources proliferating all over the world. The prominent incident on the scarcity of petrol produces a price hike in recent years. Consequently, mediocre massive people affected by this issue. As a consequence, the world's foremost economic nations like the USA invented the plan of manufacturing renewable energy generator such as wind and solar in order to control the effect of dwindling natural sources in 2020.
On the other hand, pollution is the most and vulnerable fact which ruin humans, animals, and also birds life. A recent study conducted by environmental scientists claims that 2/3rd of pollution in the air turns toxic as the vehicles emitting carbon dioxide. As a result, certain national authorities imposing the law against vehicle usage and the type of transport must be non-polluted. A good example is that, in 2019 Tesla organization which is funded by the government, introduced solar battery cars is the phenomenon for a solution to the real-time problem.
To put it in a nutshell, invent of solar and wind power sources would reduce the impact of destroying earth atmosphere particles in nature. I believe, renewable sources will make the revolution in controlling the universe in a positive way is undeniable.
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the saharadesert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and dis advantages for tourists who visit such places? 61
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y 56
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y 73
- The cots of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries. 11
- Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... revolution in controlling the universe in a positive way is undeniable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25496688742 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86969200979 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0745783794 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332200396314 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874824999577 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891585323738 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178296546867 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126956496995 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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