Fossil fuels(e.g. coals, oil and gas) are the main source of energy for most countries however, alternative source of energy (e.g. wind and solar) have been encouraged to be used by some countries.
To what extent is this a positive or negative development?
Although, fossil fuels are the most essential source of energy for most countries in the world, wind, solar, nuclear and other kind of recyclable energy can easily provide needs of some countries which have immense source of them naturally. In my point of view usage of these natural resources can be beneficial environmentally and economically. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint some of these advantages.
First, fossil fuels produce some toxic pollutant like mercury which contaminate water and air so they enter to food chain and endanger human, plants and animals health. Wind and solar energy not only do not pollute the environment, but also are endless source of energy. Fossil fuels make more energy but eventually they end that is why scientist always encourage us to use them to stay for the future. Each area according to environmental condition can use recyclable energy. For instance some countries which have sunny weather most of the time in a year can use solar panels or some countries which are windy most of the time can use wind turbine for making electricity.
Second, although, sales of fossil fuels like oil and gas is one of the source of income for some countries, I believe that countries which have less fossil fuels are richer. Dependency on the sales of oil distract government’s attention to other abilities and wealth of country. Earning money from some sources like agricultural products, tourism and other industry can be more beneficial, because they are available for longer period and they make jobs for some people which are more useful economically. For example, Iran have unprecedented natural and historical places where can attract tourists plus different weather in different area which enable farmers to cultivate different products.
To wrap it up, usage of alternative source of energy like wind, solar and nuclear can be a positive development for countries environmentally and economically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28025477707 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85794446513 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5270765967 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39481835093 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14308196329 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117601855338 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276928984816 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039845210212 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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