In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree and disagree ?
In this day and age, many people argue about choosing to travel in their own country or going abroad on holiday. In this essay, I will describe the travel trends in the local country and foreign countries.
To begin with, there are many reasons why people tend to have an internal journey. Firstly, most of these kinds of travel do not experience a long distance, which means that it may be convenient for local people to enjoy some sightseeing views there. For instance, the car is a common vehicle for any small group to travel in the local country. Moreover, these kinds of travel can make many people can know more about some traditional values of their own country, so it can not only increase their patriotism of them but also attract many visitors there. Take Huong Pagoda as a particular example. It is one of the most spiritual tourist destinations in Vietnam.
However, it has some reasons which make me disagree with the view of preferring traveling in the local country than going abroad to a foreign country, and one of them is the possibility of learning a foreign language. Someone traveling abroad will meet many strangers, and these people can communicate with foreign people because of studying a foreign language. For example, greeting in a foreign language is the thing that many individuals will study if they go abroad. In addition, traveling abroad will bring up a wonderful emotion with some people when they have to face up with something they have never experienced, so it may increase the experience for themselves. For example, many people choose “a gap year” trend often traveling abroad instead of having a job to do.
To conclude, it is a great debatable about choose to travel in a local country or foreign nation. However, I believe that they will consider many features of these destinations before deciding the place to go.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'travels'.
Suggestion: travels
...of learning a foreign language. Someone traveling abroad will meet many strangers, and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87460815047 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57359325434 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504702194357 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2978232157 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313051723904 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110596463642 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994326818346 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217116990646 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103672699326 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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