This is a fact that technology is being developed day by day due to new inventions. While I support the argument that nowadays people use online media for reading books and newspapers, I also agree that people will buy published reading material in future period of time too.
On the one hand, according to me, there are several reasons for using printed books and newspapers. Firstly, these days youngsters browse the internet more as compared to old age people at present because they have huge knowledge about using technology. Moreover, old people have been using printed newspapers and books for a long time and they are habitual of reading published papers in the morning with a cup of tea. That is why they can not stop reading printed newspapers and this is quite difficult for them to turn towards using online media. Secondly, some people love to read books because they do not know how to operate apps online so they have only a single option of reading printed books. Finally, people could access online books only if they have an internet connection sometimes there might be network issues that hinder the people to read online. However, reading published books and newspapers does not have a connection to the internet or electricity. Most importantly, printed media is not only viable for people of all ages but also cheaper than online media.
On the other hand, I also agree that online media is growing with time and numerous factors are contributing to this trend. First of all, in today’s materialistic world everyone has access to the internet such as on cell phones, on personal computers via wifi as well as on smart TV people browse the internet so it has become easy for them to read books and newspapers online. Therefore, people internet sites now because that have become techno savvy. Besides this, people can search for anything on the internet as this is too wide like on Wikipedia and encyclopedia people can read every book or news. Apart from this, there are many social sites available online which can be accessed by the public for taking daily updates. For example, YouTube and Facebook are two famous social sites used by people. What is more, people can subscribe to the channels for taking everyday news as well as people could create channels for earning money via YouTube. So that people prefer online sites more, especially, young generation. Last but not least, reading online is more interesting than reading offline and people do not need to pay extra for this.
To conclude, although I believe that online media is wide and used by people at a large level for reading news and books yet I agree that printed books and newspapers have their importance and useful for those who can not operate online media.
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by other of the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people think that climate impacts business in a negative way but others believe that it provides more business opportunities Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Tourism is encouraged in many countries Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages 73
- Do you think the advantages of travelling by car outweigh the disadvantages 78
- In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2292.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85593220339 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39014603038 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478813559322 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5629902246 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231656784039 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852816255369 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628635919053 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160423134579 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538008178251 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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