Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society.Some people think that it will improve people's lives many ways. other feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both opinion and give your opinion?
Manipulating genes have become controversial problem in temporary world. It can assist people to access higher quality of their lives, however other think it is unnatural. This essay will elaborate both negative and positive sides of genetic engineering on people’s lives . I personally believe on partially using genetic engineering method.
Scientists could alter genes to cure diseases. Some inherited ailments that cause weird morality among human being could vanish by genetic engineering. This great ability certainly enhance the quality of human lives. Furthermore ,some tough jobs by upgrading the genes ,replacement of the weak genes to stronger ones, simpleize situation in comparison of the past. The world will watch the specific prospect of earth by supermen and heroes.
On the negative side, human being are include the package of both ability and disability together. Altering the genes to make perfect sample could lead to build different type of human on the earth. Consequensely Making the strongest form of soldiers in army purpose could confront the people’s lives at risk. In addition, genetic engineering has damaged the chains of foods due to resistant of crops against pesticides. It is not normal to break the rules of the nature in way of the human’s profit.
In the way of the conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that manipulating the genes to make heroes and financial purpose is full of the risk for human being except curing diseases.
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- Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society Some people think that it will improve people s lives many ways other feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss both opinion and give your opinion 56
- Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today Some people think that it will improve people s lives in many ways Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society Some people think that it will improve people s lives many ways other feel that it may be a threat to life on earth Discuss both opinion and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29661016949 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75534856873 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618644067797 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.134765595 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180396981732 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582055362158 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542098183172 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108060381618 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627834583017 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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