Global warming is a threat to all the life on the planet. This is a very serious problem as it is caused mainly because of deforestation and extreme air pollution. This essay will delineate how government and individuals can step up to curb this fatal issue.
Air pollution is on the rise. Nowadays, more and more individuals own vehicles, which emit harmful gases that destroy the protective layer which our planet has. This results climbing temperatures as the natural shield from the sun keeps getting depleted. Moreover, the one thing, forests, that could save the earth are also being cut down due to civilization and population explosion. To illustrate, this a research, published by Department of Climate Control, mentioned that the average temperature of earth has increased by 10% in 2020 when the forest cover is 27%, as compared to 39% in 2010. This rate of rise in global temperature brought by excessive use of fossil fuels and chopping down of trees catastrophically alarming for the very existence of life.
Although, global warming is very serious, the government and individuals can actively participate to lessen the impact. Firstly, the government across the globe should make stern laws against multiple vehicle ownership per ca-pita, while promoting efficient public transport systems. A reduction in number of automobiles will bring down the levels of harmful gases released and will circumscribe the damage to the environment. Secondly, the lay person and non-government organisations must plant new trees near residential and industrial areas where the traffic density is higher. To provide an example, greener countries like USA or Canada have far less air pollution and increasing temperature issues compared to countries like Saudi Arabia and Dubai where the land is barren. Clearly, afforestation and limiting the use of vehicles run on fossil fuels can control the global temperature shooting even higher.
To sum, this essay has painted out that excessive use of timber and emission of toxic gasses has caused temperatures to rise globally, while suggesting that restricting use of cars and making the planet greener can assuage this issue.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88532635425 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0300394003 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6875 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139307654134 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487165125945 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619666569485 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848167419348 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490951785318 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88532635425 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0300394003 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6875 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139307654134 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487165125945 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619666569485 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848167419348 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490951785318 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.