Globalisation has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both and give your opinion?
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays,globalisation is gaining popularity all round the world. Although it has several plus points such as rise in economy and hold valuable position in the foreign countries, also has detrimental effects which include deterioration of the local businesses and unemployment .
To begin, there are multiple advantages associated with the globalisation because it increases the chances of profit which in return enhances the nation’s economy. Also, it rises the standard of living of the employees. For instance, a recent survey conducted by the authority, revealed that the survival rate of the industry is increased by 40% as compared with the past data. Furthermore, chances of getting valuable position in the overseas apart from the home country, opens door for setting up their branches and franchises through which they sell their products more effectively. As a result, economical growth and reputation are the positive contributors of the globalisation.
On the contrary, there are plenty of negative parameters associated with its growth.Firstly, it adversely affect the local industry, as more and more importance is given for establishing status in the other countries.This leads to less availability of the products and also raises their cost. Secondly, for maintaining the quality and standard parameters of the production, apart from hiring manpower, owners prefer to buy automatic machines. Thus, more and more workers lose their source of earning and forced to work at low wages.So, consequences of the globalisation generates scarcity of products and decline in the chance of getting the work.
To conclude, globalisation rises day by day all around the globe. While there are some disadvantages associated with it, in my opinion, positive factors overshed the consequences.
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also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60583941606 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26774165705 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5175337595 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0526819833623 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207230651463 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253896859952 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343978500998 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131400682721 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates:71.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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