Government should invest in country art, music and painting. Agree and disagree.
It has long been subject of discussion whether government should reduce investment in arts, music and painting or not. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that deserve my attention and I will elaborate by using pertinent arguments.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my context, the most conspicuous one lies in that arts, music and ancient paintings are token of history. To start with arts , it provide information related to past struggles, life in the earlier years. So, it is duty of the government to preserve historical artifacts. Apart from this, music plays a crucial role in human life, either it is classical music or pop music it has direct and indirect role in individual's life. Hence, it is apparent to invest in advancement of music industry and arts.
Another argument in favour of my view is ancient paintings disclose the culture of early human life. These paintings plays a major role in the order to enhance the knowledge of past. As per recent study conducted by the Australian Government, 75% people gained immensely from the proposed government refroms. The citizens are improving their existing scenairo tremendously and that paved the way to a better future. Therefore, not only this will make the government more careful, but also make pragmatic in the approach.
From what has been discussed above, it can Be concluded that the benefits of given topic outweigh its disadvantages. Lastly, in my opinion, it is better to invest in arts, music and painting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are token of history. To start with arts , it provide information related to past ...
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...ken of history. To start with arts , it provide information related to past struggles, ...
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Message: You should probably use 'play'.
Suggestion: play
...re of early human life. These paintings plays a major role in the order to enhance th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, apart from, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06772908367 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73850928546 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1088772142 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209323216757 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689674194588 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758818995726 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122774256381 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049264154006 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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