It has long been subject of discussion whether people face difficulty in maintaining the right balance between work or not. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that deserve attention and I will explain the given topic by using pertinent arguments.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my context, the most conspicuous one lines in that people should be more aware aware with their decisions. To explain, a recent survey carried out by the Stanford University, 60% people face difficulties while balancing the work and other aspects of life. On the other hand, 40% people are able to manage their time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: aware
...one lines in that people should be more aware aware with their decisions. To explain, a rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 31.9359605911 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 525.0 1207.87684729 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 242.827586207 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 3.92707691288 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56319670027 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 139.433497537 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.742857142857 0.580463131201 128% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 379.143842365 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4269352469 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190822141739 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094881800255 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522029506125 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13744860282 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485122777193 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 55.0591133005 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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