Governments prohibiting the underage children for getting full-time jobs in certain
countries. Do you agree or disagree?
It is prevented by public authorities in several nations to allow infants under eighteen years old to work full-day. In fact, I agree with this statement because the government obligated to protect dependents from being abused and ensure that they are receiving an appropriate education, and the reasons behind my stance will be further provided in this essay.
To begin with, due to the tough circumstances in developing nations various children are forced to work in order to assist in the family's expenses. This means that they not only face a challenging work environment that is not suitable for such a young age, but also deal with cruel employers. For instance, the number of working children has been reduced significantly after issuing rules concerning the child’s rights. Hence, a restrictive regulation Is needed to prevent abusive parents to take advantage of their children.
In addition to that, neglecting their basic needs that are related to education and enjoying their childhood can have a threatening impact on their future. This is because spending the whole day working wouldn’t allow them to keep up with their studying or having time to play. And without obtaining a respectful degree and knowledge they have no chance to acquire a representable job as adults. A prime example of this is the increasing numbers of homeless people in poor countries because of their incapability to continue their studies.
To conclude, I would like to restate my opinion that the governments should prevent children from working the same amount of time that adults work, this is because of my firm belief that every child has the right to be protected against any abusive act. Thus, if they get educated, there will be a higher chance for poor children to have a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11486486486 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76997361629 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4786501727 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122464410935 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450826153612 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317707214396 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759655017449 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361542378678 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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