The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Increase in number of obese people is impacting the health care system badly. So to deal with this problem, a significant number of people consider that increase of sports classes in school syllabus is the prime way to deal with such situations in order to benefit the society. In my opinion, I completely agree and opine that such activities can benefit them in a number of ways.
More physical classes will encourage people to do such tasks on regularly to combat the health related issues. Increasing the levels of physical education in school syllabus will ensure the introduction of more students to such classes as well as the frequency of doing exercise on daily basis. Which also will make people more aware about their health and diet to maintain their physic. For instance, students these days spent most of their time in indoor activities, thus encouraging them with introducing more classes will definitely benefit the society.
In addition to that, the immediate circle of the student will also take the advantage of such steps to eliminate the hazard of obesity. Boosting their young ones will definitely involve their parents to perform such tasks and their friend circles will also learn by discussing things around. It is often observed that father sportsmen include his son in sports only. Hence, increasing the number of games in classes will profit the family and close groups of the learner.
In conclusion, increase in the number of cases in fatness among individuals is affecting the health care system severely, therefore the introduction of extra classes in the school class work is the best way to find the right solution. I also believe that as it will not only involve the students itself but their family members also and decrease the obesity problems in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01337792642 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49946247619 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518394648829 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5497870502 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221617391756 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874710184162 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896884657969 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147166141127 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10545395382 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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