Even though, there is an enormous growth in technology, scientists are still exploiting animals for testing vaccines. While a stratum of society condemns this cruel act, others contend that testing on animals plays a crucial role in the field of medicine. Although, I do not support this grievous act of testing medicines on animals, still I will delve into both the views.
As some people believe that every creature in this planet have equal rights to live, they oppose the notion of testing medicines on animals, which could have deleterious effects on them. To elucidate, as per ‘Cruelty Free International Organization’, more than 115 million animals are in experiments globally every year, of which almost 30 percent of them dies due to side effects of the medicines used. For example, Aspirin, a commonly used drug by humans for pain-relief, has noxious effects on animals and as a result, many animals had died. Moreover, animals do not get many of the human diseases like HIV, Parkinson’s disease and many types of cancer. For testing vaccines on animals, the symptoms of those diseases are artificially induced in animals in laboratories to mimic the human disease. Thus, animals are tormented in an artificial environment for the benefit of humans.
On the other hand, it is believed by some that animal research is extremely beneficial. One point to consider is that the various new drugs discovered, after testing them on animals, have saved number of human lives. For instance, drugs tested on animals to know their effects have revolutionized the management of the blood cancer patients. Adding further, research on animals is conducted in a controlled environment and is not as painful as claimed by various animal welfare organization. For example, anti-snake venom is extracted from horse and sheep without inflicting even mild pain to them.
To conclude, although, animal research has been supporting a lot for human’s knowledge on medicines, still its disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
- Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 89
- There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessments 84
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 92
- Science finds that by studying the behavior of three year old children they can predict if they will grow up to be criminals To what extent is criminality related to human nature Is it possible to stop children from being a criminal when they grow up 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2786377709 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90465841642 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1404940406 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28253277045 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991445046118 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048324399737 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165987056115 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525509517455 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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