Stress kills us from inside and it can lead to personal, social, physical and psychological issues that drives us to the verge of dilapidation. Stress and anxiety are far more severe and widespread among the modern generation than their forefathers. The reasons for this crisis can be attributed to the poor working conditions and the worldwide financial crisis. Several initiatives could be taken to address this problem.
One of the primary reasons for this widespread problem is the demanding and highly competitive work environment in the modern era, especially in private sectors. Constant work pressure, deadlines, targets, fear of losing a job, and higher ambitions in career lead to lengthier office hours and little time for family. It also disrupts relationship, social life and sleep pattern, and grows unhealthy diet habit and sedentary lifestyle. The final result is a more stressful life and deteriorating health condition.
Another reason for this heinous problem is the global economic crisis and rampant inflation. As a result of our modern lifestyle and expectations along with raging inflation, many people find it extremely difficult to meet their expenses and often get trapped in loans and debts. Bankruptcy is increasing and more people are trying to get a second job to support their lifestyle than ever before and the result is more depression and distress, which even leads to suicides.
As a solution to this social catastrophe, governments should make further efforts to improve laws to restrict the working hours and push employers to improve the working environment for their employees. In addition, financial aids to needy people and mentorship and therapy programmes for already sufferers are needed. Finally and most importantly, we, as individuals have to be more prudent in our lifestyle choice, expenses, savings and retirement plan, and spend quality time with our family to eliminate stress and tension.
In conclusion, stress is a silent killer and impedes our performance, deteriorates our health and destroys our relationship. It is expected that individuals and governments will work hard to make a stress-free modern world for all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ammes for already sufferers are needed. Finally and most importantly, we, as individual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41348973607 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91179162311 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571847507331 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0350978624 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234856860579 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787468040998 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609571672807 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134588966753 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050230714459 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.