Many people believe that animals need to be exploited by the humans to have a healthier and luxury lifestyle,
while few argue that every creature in the world should be treated equally.I would be discussing both views
as follows.
To begin with,In most of the countries people usually consume Non-vegetarian in their daily lifestyle.I heard
my friends saying that they use leather for clothing which is made up of the skin of animals.As from the recent
research in 2019 CNB declared that, about 80% of people from other countries use handbags,coats which were made up of
leather.Most of the fashion jewelry is also made from animal parts.Many pharma company's while releasing their
medicines into market they use to test the drug on Rats and Dogs.In this way they are earning lots of money
by testing on animals so brutally.
On the other side,few argues that animals should be treated in the same way as humans are treated.Rather than hurting
them,humans can use them wisely, likewise by giving proper training to Dogs,they can be used for security reasons.
Mammals like Cows are treated as god by many people,they can used in farming by providing a healthy diet so that they
can give abundant milk,curd,butter,ghee etc.. which can be consumed by humans for a healthier lifestyle.Humans should also change
the habits of consuming Non vegetarian so that it can help the animals to survive.
To conclude,even humans are not interested to change there habits of exploiting the animals.It is necessary to think about other creatures
to have a better world.
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...y use to test the drug on Rats and Dogs.In this way they are earning lots of money...
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...d in the same way as humans are treated.Rather than hurting them,humans can use them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, while, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17054263566 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94654211748 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.261875552 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.333333333 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325188668635 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159619380744 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753269900818 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105481365203 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574179653723 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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