The current pandemic has forced us to telecommute for every single purpose. This essay will discuss that telecommuting has proved to be beneficial when it comes to saving time and environment. However, increased exposure to screens and lack of social activity have proved to be negatives of the same.
Telecommuting saves the time that people spend going and coming back from work. Especially in bigger cities, traffic tends to take up several hours, thereby wasting plenty of time that people could have used for themselves and their families. Additionally, telecommuting is relatively environment friendly. Since people no longer use their vehicles and public transport, it leads to reduction in air pollution, giving us a cleaner environment.
For example, during the first wave of COVID-19 pandemic, the skies were much more blue than grey, mainly because people were working from home, curbing air pollution.
As beneficial telecommuting is, it also has certain disadvantages. Lack of social interaction leads to mental health issues such as depression and anxiety. It is crucial for a person’s emotional well-being that they interact with their peers. Furthermore, only relying on computer screens for interaction has led to several eye defects which would not happen otherwise. The harmful blue light from computer and phone screens causes severe damage to our eyes. For example, a recent study conducted by Vision Health Board in 2020 revealed that constant exposure to blue light reduces one’s eyesight by double in a span of one year.
In conclusion, Both the advantages and disadvantages are equally important when it comes to telecommuting. It has helped us spend time with our loved ones along with saving the environment. However, it has certain disadvantages such as exposure to blue light and lack of interaction with friends and colleagues.
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- Fast food is a part of life in some places Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet Do you agree or disagree 78
- Is it good for families if parents need to travel a lot in their job or if they need to move to other cities? Is moving to a new location positive for children? 56
- Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success Others believe that there are other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion
- Is it good for families if parents need to travel a lot in their job or if they need to move to other cities Is moving to a new location positive for children 91
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, so, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39590443686 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91861759972 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7076788352 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185547867184 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553924088486 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539676271607 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993599489759 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444421206279 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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