Assuredly, these days, people travel to other cities because of their jobs which can be considered as beneficial for both parents and children. I believe, it is a positive development for both parents to migrate and their offsprings to other places for job purposes.
To begin with, there are several benefits of traveling in jobs. First and foremost, parents can earn a higher income because of good job options. This will not only improve their standard of living but also help them to save money for their old age. Secondly, parents will be able to provide quality education and can nurture their children in a better way. As some organizations at few places provide financial benefits to their employees. For instance, children of army officers in India, are provided with a high-quality education in special schools that are available for them.
Furthermore, moving to new places is worthwhile for children too. Primarily, children will become a social animal due to which their communication skills will improve. This skill will help them to travel all over the world without any difficulty. Thus, they will learn how to adapt to different environments conveniently. Additionally, through traveling, they will be able to know about different cultures and languages. Owing to this, they will become multilingual and can attain higher job opportunities in the future.
In conclusion, because of good job opportunities, better nourishment of children and advantages for a child to bring a social as well as multilingual, I am convinced that this development is a positive one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...nsidered as beneficial for both parents as well as children. I believe that it is a positi...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nurture their children in a better way. Since some organizations at few places provid...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are available for them. Furthermore, moving to new places is worthwhile for c...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... over the world without any difficulty. thus, they will learn how to adapt themselve...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nities in the future. In conclusion, because of good job opportunities, bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25291828794 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96678764747 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.23601646 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333262254122 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111076650946 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875718108095 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207162967823 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786603953958 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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