It is generally claimed that overcrowded population is a serious problem in many countries. some people say that government should provide new accommodation to people in the urban area; however, others and I agree that the government should build new houses in the countryside. This essay will discuss and examine both points of view.
Numerous people including me believe that distribute the plethora of population from a city to the countryside is an effective approach to ease the problem. By expanding a living area to a rural definitely reduce the excessive number of population in the city. Moreover, in the long-term, the government can easily increase the buildings in the rural area, since there is an immense number of available spaces. In contrast, the government will aggravate this situation if he decides to use the limited paces in an urban because the free area will rapidly run out as the population continuously grow.
On the other hand, some people argue that providing new homes in the city and downtown is a better choice. They perceive that owning a house in this area can comfort their lifestyle as people generally spend less time to access public amenities and department stores. For instance, in Thailand, we have a high-speed monorail system in Bangkok which help people to commute and travel to anywhere they want, but in many rural areas do not have this kind of convenient transit. This advantage illustrates why the government should provide accommodation to people in the city and why this option is preferred for many people.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits from building houses in the city, the government should take the densely populated issue into an account and expand the new accommodation in Urban.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12110726644 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7851253847 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8654624653 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281295058795 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100981923989 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837610895464 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177195261054 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771031404161 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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