The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closed. Do you agree or disagree?
Since the advent of internet since twentieth century, shopping has simplified daily life style of people. It is believed that the initiation and immense widening of electronic commerce habit could be a serious problem for general traders to continue their businesses in different municipalities. I strongly disagree with this statement and this essay will argue why the introduction of online shopping does not materially impact to abandon businesses.
Undoubtedly, online trading facilitates people’s daily routine more comfortable. Previously, if people require to purchase things as per their necessity, they really require to visit shops, travel cities to search for goods. In this instance, definitely, these people require to spend extra time; extra money and extra effort on it. Shopping via online has reduced all these complications and therefore, today, there is an immense demand on electronic purchase system which has a positive contribution to economic growth as well.
Despite, having greater positive impact, this trend will never be a material reason to close down shops and cities of a country physically. Literally, only educated people would be able successfully deal with web based shopping. Neither less educated nor less knowledgeable people on internet would not be able to recognize the efficiency on online purchases approach. For instance, uneducated and impoverished person should definitely visits shops to fulfil his/her requirements. Therefore, still there will be a certain category of people who will physically visit to shops.
Level of education is not only the reason for physical existence of shops. Shopping with friends or colleagues is known to be a leisure or fun activity for many people and therefore, even being an educated person, sometimes still the preference of these people is to visit shops which in turn leads to develop strong relationship among them.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the appearance of online shopping system does not materially impact to cease businesses in a country as several other factors contribute people to continue their general shopping habits as usual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'purchasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: purchasing
...fortable. Previously, if people require to purchase things as per their necessity, they rea...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'visiting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: visiting
...er their necessity, they really require to visit shops, travel cities to search for good...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...tance, definitely, these people require to spend extra time; extra money and extra effor...
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Line 13, column 437, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'visit'
Suggestion: visit
...d impoverished person should definitely visits shops to fulfil his/her requirements. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6170212766 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91324978767 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.199597422 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195866538627 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654226356965 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557218381827 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115378203108 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153240554416 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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