The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing
Do you agree or disagree
Online shopping had gone viral these days especially in big cities which bring not only bring convenient to citizens but the competition in e-markets bring down the price of commodities. Someone argue that the virtual shopping will instead the real one one day. However, I believe the online shopping will lead the shops for better development.
It is undeniable that the online shopping comes from the street shops with the development of Internet and modern communication technology, that is, it is not a really virtual thing but just sell goods online. The online shops uses the cyber technology to make their commodities have a better way to exhibit to consumers, like the 3D window show, makes people free like a real shopping but at home. Therefore, online shopping will compete with shops in street, but in fact, increasing street shops prefer use its online shopping to boost their sales.
On the other hand, the boosting of online shops lead fierce competition in market, customer may compare the price and make their decision by just click their mouse. Someone says it is the real threat to the shops in real world, because without the burden of tax and shop rent, the online shopping may has an ultimate low price. However, they ignore the fact that even though people can purchase the low price items online, but people also dare to get the fake one because they can not see the real thing, therefore, the online shopping may have little chance to replace the shops in the long run.
In conclusion, even though the online shopping has threaten the shops so far, but with the transformation of street shops and if the government may give some subsidy to the shops, it is impossible to see the real shops decrease even disappear one day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... down the price of commodities. Someone argue that the virtual shopping will instead ...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... down the price of commodities. Someone argue that the virtual shopping will instead ...
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Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: one
... virtual shopping will instead the real one one day. However, I believe the online shop...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'use'.
Suggestion: use
...ust sell goods online. The online shops uses the cyber technology to make their comm...
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Line 13, column 52, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'threatened'.
Suggestion: threatened
...on, even though the online shopping has threaten the shops so far, but with the transfor...
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Line 13, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... shops decrease even disappear one day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86710963455 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42127741042 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.635979073 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373190020796 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194661138307 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754907052073 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269106227613 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524762776771 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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