It is argued that the increasing trend of buying from the internet will replace traditional shops in the cities. This essay disagrees with this statement because people still love to spend their spare time for shopping and some online products do not fulfil the customer’s needs.
Often shopping is considered as a leisure activity and it also helps to release stress. People who are engaged in a busy schedule of five working days are visiting supermarkets for groceries and essentials during the weekend. This activity will allow all family members to spend their free time together, talk to each other, to eat lunch or dinner together and to forget work-related stress. For example, many well-known supermarkets claim that over 70 percent of their sales are done through physical store locations despite they maintaining user-friendly websites to order products online and get them delivered to the doorstep.
Every item sold on the internet does not meet customer satisfaction. Most of the time, clothing and accessories, jewelry, and shoes are classified as failed products to sell online because the buyer always considers many aspects when purchasing these products such as how it fits to the shape of the body, different colors, and quality of the material and so on. Therefore, people preferably chose to go to shopping mall when buying items such as the above. For example, over 60 percent of female office ware sold on the “Daraz” had received negative feedback and reported decreasing yield on their sales analysis.
In conclusion, shops in the cities will continue to remain despite internet shopping keeps growing because men and women are willing to spend time on shopping and the online purchasing experience is not good for all products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...In conclusion, shops in the cities will continue to remain despite internet shopping keeps growing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67011780374 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7789000179 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212489362315 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768361224374 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824169110083 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152907408306 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976203286283 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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