the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing
do you agree or disagree?
Increase in number of online shopping can cause different things. The majority of shops concern i they will bankrupt soon due to the fast growing of online shopping. However, some people believe that a great deal of shops can still survive. In this essay I will consider both sides and give my own view.
To begin with, as people are so busy these days and they face shortage of time, so shopping online may be convenient for them. They can easily browse the websites and choose from the wide variety of shopping options with fast and reliable delivery channel which make people prefer e-commerce sites rather than traditional shops.
Another vital point is the lack of trust that people have on the online shops. These people like to visit retail and traditional shops where they can check the quality of what they want to buy by themselves. This may because of having a bad experience they have had or seen from the others.
To conclude, although the obsession of online purchasing cannot be ignored, malls and shops are not threatened by the internet shopping and retail therapy can be an acceptable example for my idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3212366062 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7841162675 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189186623805 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826046213277 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506052353671 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122478689253 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514731767106 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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