It is an undeniable fact that all local shops will be locked down in towns and cities due to the increasing trend of online shopping. However, I partially agree with the given notion.
Online shopping holds a wide range of constructive benefits. Firstly, E-Shopping websites provide a wide range of various items that attract customers to shop online. Secondly, shopaholics can shop online from anywhere at any time around the world due to online shopping. Thirdly, teleshopping offers unbeatable discounts and deals which in turn pleases customers to shop that particular item which would be costly to buy from a local shop market.
On the other hand, local shops are a basic daily requirement for a consumer to buy fresh items. To illustrate, a grocery shop can never be closed down because of cyber shopping as every consumer wants to buy fresh grocery items from the nearest market available in their region. Similarly, all pharmacy shops in the commercial market will remain open. Because, in the event of an emergency, it is quicker and easier to buy medicines from a nearby medical shop rather than buying them online.
To conclude, due to the boom in online shopping, some of the local shops in the market will be closed down. But, the everyday necessities and in the case of emergency the grocery and medical shops will remain open in the local market. Therefore, no matter how online shopping is getting increasing day by day, these two local shops cannot be locked down.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lock'
Suggestion: lock
...e ongoing trend of online shopping will locked down all local shops in the market. How...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a shopaholic' or simply 'shopaholics'?
Suggestion: a shopaholic; shopaholics
...cts customers to shop online. Secondly, a shopaholics can shop online from anywhere at anytim...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...clude, due to the boom online shopping, some of the local shops in the market will be close...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02651515152 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60164961002 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2585928158 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334697014995 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141297476767 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063274564776 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235589009309 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567357283259 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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