Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness.
It is difficult to define those things which are intangible or unpredictable. The meaning of Happiness, for what the entire human race is running after, changes person to person. Thus, it is truly said that happiness can be expressed can not be elaborated. In the paragraphs to come, I would try to discuss the reason behind the difficulty in defining happiness along with few of the important factors which can help in achieving it.
To commences with, the highly futuristic approach towards the life has played a crucial role in vanishing the meaning happiness from the human life. Worries about the future have gulped the enjoyment of existing time of people which they are ruining in the secure future. Moreover, the feeling of satisfaction has also be reduced in the nature of mankind. People want to achieve more and more in their life and do not feel contend about what they pursue. Last but not the least, the jealousy on other's success never allow a person to feel happy about their own small achievements.Hence, In order to chase the success of others, they forget to celebrate their current success.
The situation can be altered by changing the perception towards the fact of happiness. In order to achieve happiness, one should feel contend for what they are blessed with in their life by looking at less fortunate people who doesn't have enough sources to satisfy their basic needs even. Next, in spite of being jealous of the achiever , the person should take inspiration for moving forward. Last but not the least, everyone should start to leave in present rather only planning for future and regretting for the past. Enjoying every moment with what you have can give you the true feeling of the happiness.
All in all, we cannot buy happiness by buying costly products and comforts. Happiness lies in spreading happiness and it is the universal truth that just changing the angle of your view can change the entire scenario of the life.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 335 350
No. of Characters: 1586 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.278 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.734 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.387 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.957 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.515 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
A well-being of a person is
A well-being of a person is often measured by his/her happiness. Happiness is also a measure of success for some whereas for some it is a measure of mental peace. Whichever might be your personal definition of happiness, will always be true for your life.
Happiness is a very subjective as well as open-ended term which is still undefined. It is very difficult to define happiness for people, as we all are rational beings and thought process of every individual is different. Happiness is abstract as well as non-measurable and hence cannot be quantified to reach to a conclusive definition. Different people can have varied opinions on their definition of happiness. For example, a person working in a city will have a seven digit salary as a measure of happiness whereas a student studying in the same city will have good marks as a measure of his/her happiness. Happiness, therefore cannot be defined under common grounds.
Hard work is one of the most important factors for achieving happiness. In today's world happiness is more or less related to a person's achievements in his/her personal and professional life. Along with hard work, balance is also an important factor to achieve happiness in a holistic way. The word 'balance' is not only limited to personal and professional life but also with mind-body and inner-outer world balance.
To conclude i would say happiness in any form should not be kept confined to oneself and should be translated to others by actions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.195054945055 0.247107183377 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.186813186813 0.155533422707 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851648351648 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467032967033 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0494505494505 0.0437548338989 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14010989011 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0631868131868 0.0403226058552 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54378982031 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.032967032967 0.0326793684256 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101648351648 0.0861772015684 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0302197802198 0.021408717616 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0247252747253 0.011925033212 207% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1973.0 1933.35771543 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90718562874 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353293413174 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245508982036 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149700598802 0.203846283523 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104790419162 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54378982031 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 60.0188251136 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.875 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2532802678 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.3125 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 45.4258982036 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.40776699029 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266795545505 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101745074336 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0624729048191 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542375671191 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1208627945 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118392332365 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690064551791 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.455139536334 0.324371583561 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0737016648228 0.0638462369009 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214831303755 0.228012699653 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951559068881 0.058150111329 164% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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