Some people believe that it is better to keep criminals in prison for longer, while others disagree and say that we must find a different solution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Surveys depict an increased ratio of crime in many countries. Some intellectuals assert that criminals should get long imprisonment whereas others argue to find other solutions for the betterment of the society. I strongly believe in providing humane treatment in favor of reducing criminal activities in the world.
It is rightly said that no one is born criminal. There are circumstances behind the birth of any crime and criminal. So, the criminals should be kept in the rehabilitation center where their circumstances can be understood by experts to provide them best solution to overcome from it. For instance, sometimes psychological disorders would be accountable for any offense which can be identified and cured. Moreover, skill centers can be developed where prisoners can learn new skills to leave criminal activity and to live the graceful life. For example, the central jail of Ahmedabad, Prisoners are learning skills of carpentry, cooking, arts and so on. At last, disconnect from the outer world may increase their anxiety which can enforce negativity in them. So, development center with the open environment can be the good solution in order to reduce the criminal thoughts from the prisoner’s mind.
On the other hand, many criminals are very harmful to the society that requires strict punishment owing to restrict the repetitive offenses. For example, drugs suppliers, forterrorist are the threto the society. Secondly, some criminals are so powerful that they can operate their activity by sitting in prison if they are not disconnected for long tenure.For example, there are a number of incidents happened in the world when mafias and underworld have such strong network that they can execute their awful activities by sitting in jails as well. Finally, criminals who are not the victim of circumstances but involved in a crime purposefully are difficult to reform. So, sometimes long term imprisonment can only be the solution left with the legislation.
To conclude, long-term captivity can never be the solution for all type of criminals to get developed. I strongly believe that crime ratio can be reduced with the supply of care and development in place of strict imprisonment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'them the best'.
Suggestion: them the best
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30681818182 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96370956407 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9261848469 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125552235709 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433508600944 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449566745676 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960708965926 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458573941044 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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