Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is pertained to the satiation. If a person is satisfy with what all he has, he would be the most happiest person around the globe. However, different stratum have different opnion on happiness. This essay will be the assertion of importance of happiness along with its factors.
First and foremost reason of being happy is the feeling of stressfree and quality life but it is quite strenuous to find defination of 'happiness'. Some set of people think that happiness is all about with money, if a person is quite wealthy he would not have to run behind basic necessities of life. On the other hand, some set of people defines that happiness is all about when we sacrifice the materialistic things of the world, although such kind of practice is hard to do. Whereas , majority of people defines it as pleasurable satisfaction whether it would related to an individual or with his own family.
Nevertheless, there are endless definations of happiness but it is also necessary to find the factors behind happiness. Some people leave no stone unturned to get their dreams by doing hard work in their career so they could able to espuse their family. As a result, they can entertain themselves with all the basic necessities of life without worrying about financial distress. For instance, spending quality time with your children and family always turns up your mood from anxiety and work stress. Being healthy is another major factor of happiness because few moments of pressure in a day makes us more rejuvenate.
Conclusively, I would like to accentuate the fact that people are following the hardship in persuit of happiness but they should not forget to live their life with zeal. Although there are certain factors of happiness but a person should be satiated with all what he has already in his life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...tained to the satiation. If a person is satisfy with what all he has, he would be the m...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...y with what all he has, he would be the most happiest person around the globe. However, diffe...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...y with what all he has, he would be the most happiest person around the globe. However, diffe...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...wealthy he would not have to run behind basic necessities of life. On the other hand, some set o...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not have to run behind basic necessities of life. On the other hand, some set of ...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... kind of practice is hard to do. Whereas , majority of people defines it as pleasu...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'relate'
Suggestion: relate
...easurable satisfaction whether it would related to an individual or with his own family...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...y can entertain themselves with all the basic necessities of life without worrying about financia...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252252252252 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.138138138138 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0750750750751 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036036036036 0.0501214627716 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0720720720721 0.0437548338989 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.162162162162 0.122226691241 133% => OK
Participles: 0.024024024024 0.0403226058552 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6588355494 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03003003003 0.0326793684256 92% => OK
Particles: 0.003003003003 0.00163938923432 183% => OK
Determiners: 0.0840840840841 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027027027027 0.021408717616 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00900900900901 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1818.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88349514563 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349514563107 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26213592233 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174757281553 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126213592233 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6588355494 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.92906426 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7671481794 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.813592233 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.78048780488 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268051249912 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0976948570923 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0903975062326 0.0668466124924 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517865556199 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145171831804 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122227705204 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774794688874 0.0742795772207 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365261747378 0.324371583561 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0346872992489 0.0638462369009 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197127656799 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239010947782 0.058150111329 41% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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