A healthy life is the root of happiness. It is said that the level of obesity is increasing in the masses of some nations. As a result, they are not physically fit and healthy. There are various causes of this issue, such as addiction to technology and hectic schedule. However, these issues can be resolved if the government limited the consumption of fast food and awareness programs regarding become healthy and fit.
One of the main reasons for this situation is excessive use of technology, as it is said that "excessiveness of everything is bad." Due to the vast usage of the availability of technology, there is lesser human activity involved. Hence, they feel lethargic. A survey carried out by a leading newspaper, The Times of India, in 2015, concluded that due to usage of lift, washing machine, and other household stuff, are mandatory as compare to 1970. Another reason for this is the busy schedule. In this contemporary era, human beings are indulged in proving their self to earn money resultantly; they do not have time and have pressure on them. So, they do not look after their health and face the problem of weight gain.
However, with some better steps, these problems can be resolved. Firstly, the government should pass stringent law for limited production related to fast food. So that people will prefer to eat healthy and organic food. Secondly, an awareness program should be run regarding health and limited use of technology as a consequence; human beings will move forward to become fit and healthy.
In conclusion, despite, excessive use of technology and hectic schedule are the reason behind overweight. But, less consumption of fast food and limited use of technology, this problem can be resolved.
A healthy life is the root of happiness. It is said that the level of obesity is increasing in the masses of some nations. As a result, they are not physically fit and healthy. There are various causes of this issue, such as addiction to technology and hectic schedule. However, these issues can be resolved if the government limited the consumption of fast food and awareness programs regarding become healthy and fit.
One of the main reasons for this situation is excessive use of technology, as it is said that "excessiveness of everything is bad." Due to the vast usage of the availability of technology, there is lesser human activity involved. Hence, they feel lethargic. A survey carried out by a leading newspaper, The Times of India, in 2015, concluded that due to usage of lift, washing machine, and other household stuff, are mandatory as compare to 1970. Another reason for this is the busy schedule. In this contemporary era, human beings are indulged in proving their self to earn money resultantly; they do not have time and have pressure on them. So, they do not look after their health and face the problem of weight gain.
However, with some better steps, these problems can be resolved. Firstly, the government should pass stringent law for limited production related to fast food. So that people will prefer to eat healthy and organic food. Secondly, an awareness program should be run regarding health and limited use of technology as a consequence; human beings will move forward to become fit and healthy.
In conclusion, despite, excessive use of technology and hectic schedule are the reason behind overweight. But, less consumption of fast food and limited use of technology, this problem can be resolved.
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- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Others think that it is important for children to take decisions about matters th 56
- A healthy life is the root of happiness. It is said that the level of obesity is increasing in the masses of some nations. As a result, they are not physically fit and healthy. There are various causes of this issue, such as addiction to technology and he 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'run'?
Suggestion: run
...econdly, an awareness program should be run regarding health and limited use of tec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0724137931 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84786671521 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6474558657 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5294117647 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289801577929 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109965939699 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134762820991 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203854345731 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247642857812 0.056905535591 435% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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