A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Healthy living which is an important aspect of human lives can be achieved through regular exercise, stress reduction and proper dieting. In my country Nigeria, staying healthy is a collective responsibility of both the people and employers.
To begin with, living a good life can be achieved by having sufficient rest and relaxation through engaging in leisure activities such as reading novels, playing games, watching movies, listening to music or sleeping. Resting is important because it ensures total recovery of the physical and mental state of the person after the day’s work; thereby forestalling and possible breakdown of the body. More so, regular medical check-up (such as blood pressure and sugar level) which is key to attaining good health status ensures people are aware of their well-being. Consequently, people can regulate their activities to ensure they always stay healthy. For instance, the New York Times reported that about seventy percent of deaths in the last two months, were heart related which is caused by high blood pressure.
Furthermore, employers have significant role to play to ensure people (particularly her employees) stay healthy. Firstly, by ensuring the environment is always clean (such as clean toilets to avoid infections) as well as providing recommended office furnitures (like seats that support healthy sitting posture) for her employees. Secondly, promoting awareness about healthy living (which include, not sitting for too long to avoid spine related ailment and preventive measures against infectious diseases like corona virus).
As a closing remark, while there are different to ensure one stays healthy, individuals and corporate bodies have significant roles to play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57034220532 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71292709052 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665399239544 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9194426182 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.181818182 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11733333211 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480062820632 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349351205131 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727149188138 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039494920585 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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