You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
It has been noticed that everyone describes a healthy person based on his diet or regular exercise and who stays away from stress. There is a common phrase that a sound mind exists in sound body which proves above statement true. In this essay, I would shed light on various procedures that are used by people to keep themselves healthy.
First of all, diet has a vital role to maintain ones physical health. Many consult with dietitian to get proper meal chart to secure their life from illnesses. Moreover, it is true that food provides essential vitamins and other resources to body which helps to develop high immunity and decrease the risk of falling ill. Therefore, humans are more concentrated about their edibles and do not think about money when consult with any dietitian. Apart from this, body flexibility can be obtained by doing regular exercise. Highest amount to population accepts this technique to keep themselves physically fit and they can do this at free of cost whereas for diet plan they have to pay fees.
Furthermore, only body fitness can not lead to proper healthy life as mental health also plays significant role to keep human being away from diseases. To avoid mental strain numerous masses attend yoga classes as well as join meditation lectures or groups. For instance, nowadays everyone is busy at their work and do not have time to think about their health, hence they participate in these activities to free themselves from tensions of job duties which makes them relax.
To conclude, proper meals, daily basis physical activities and meditation are the most common habits among people to get rid from sickness which are actually beneficial for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 521, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Highest'.
Suggestion: The Highest
... be obtained by doing regular exercise. Highest amount to population accepts this techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, as for, for instance, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96466431095 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42418279288 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2329409558 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148193619986 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517228257971 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055065553994 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881930800936 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456391826121 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.