Write about the following topic:
A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise,s and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
People’s health always relies on many aspects. To maintain an active lifestyle everyone should adopt some good practices such as healthy eating, regular exercise, and make their surroundings a non-pollutant and stress-free environment.
Firstly, eating healthy is one of the most crucial things one has to practice in their life to keep them healthy. Because of the busy lifestyle, dwellers in India always tend to eat junk food instead of homemade food, which causes severe health disorders, in particular, obesity, chronic disorders, and heart diseases. Besides, being conscious about what they eat, how many calories are consuming, and burning every day is also important. Tracking of their calories also helps people to preserve an active lifestyle.
Secondly, regular exercise can boosts people to remain healthy. Everyone has to take up exercise suchlike walking and yoga. However, many people in India express their interest in practicing yoga, which has been approved by many countries. Another significant issue is getting over stress; regular meditation is the optimum choice to keep away from stress. Maintaining every day calories can only be possible with daily exercise, because everybody may not be conscious of their everyday food consumption in their hectic schedule.
Finally, Environment also plays a vital role in citizen’s health. Keeping surrounding green and pollution-free is the best option to sustain good health particularly, in a huge populating country like India.
To sum up, to conserve good health people in every country has to adopt some healthy habits. Regular exercise, corrode healthy food, keeping away stress, and the pollution-free environment is the four main things to hold good health.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d, which causes severe health disorders, in particular, obesity, chronic disorder...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... disorders, and heart diseases. Besides, being conscious about what they eat, how...
^^
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'boost'
Suggestion: boost
...estyle. Secondly, regular exercise can boosts people to remain healthy. Everyone has ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in particular, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53007518797 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79129958683 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6258869442 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153920540345 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553651233844 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447584230776 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946145182121 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486408696563 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d, which causes severe health disorders, in particular, obesity, chronic disorder...
^^
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... disorders, and heart diseases. Besides, being conscious about what they eat, how...
^^
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'boost'
Suggestion: boost
...estyle. Secondly, regular exercise can boosts people to remain healthy. Everyone has ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in particular, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53007518797 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79129958683 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6258869442 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153920540345 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553651233844 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447584230776 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946145182121 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486408696563 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.