Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction, Agree or disagree
It is often argued that choosing a high-wage job is more advantageous than job satisfaction. I completely disagree with this statement and opine that job satisfaction is much more crucial than salary.
First of all, I strongly believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment, which cannot get with money. Even if a person is earning a high salary, and he always feels tensed and compromised with his job, that person cannot enjoy his life completely. While pursuing one’s interests will always provide him more pleasure and a feeling of satisfaction. For instance, many famous researchers throughout the world are not choosing their careers to obtain more wages. Even though, they are getting less income, following their profession because of their interest in that.
Secondly, doing what we like will keep us motivated and therefore leads to career growth. In other words, there is a strong relationship between job satisfaction and productivity. If a person loves his career, he gives his complete efforts and can excel in his fields, also attain good results than a person who gave his priority to a high salary. Take an example of Dhoni, the famous Indian cricket player who gave up his every day despite a good wage and ventured to become a cricket. After enduring many ups and downs finally stood in the first place of the world’s best cricketers also one of the well-paid cricketers of the twentieth century.
To sum up, I believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than a high salary because it makes people happy and motivated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, first of all, in other words, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0153256705 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7584344339 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5729609424 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23043206855 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093408216598 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112237755378 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195880338048 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137228018602 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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