television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Television plays a pivotal role in our daily life. Nowadays, the majority of people consider that watching TV in their free time is the most effective way to gain knowledge and get relaxation. I believe that people are becoming less active and unsocial by spending their precious house time watching TV.
Firstly, because of spending more time on television, people are not getting social interactions, which has a great effect on their mental personality. Although they are gaining knowledge about current affairs and news, they are trailing their relations with their immediate community, by avoiding socializing with their neighbors. For instance, ordinary family members spending at least 3-4 hours of their daily time on TV in India instead of spending time with their family, as a result, the family relations ruins, which in turn shows a negative effect on society also.
Secondly, watching television not only makes people mentally inactive but also physically weak. Citizens are becoming less active and nonproductive by spending 2-3 hours every day on Tv, which has no physical activity. Spending time on TV makes people obese and less productive. Especially young people are doing less exercise every day, which results in poor efficiency. According to a survey in India published in times express in 2020, 60% of people, mostly young children are facing obesity problems because of less physical activities in their everyday life.
To sum up, I opine that spending more time on television has fewer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...turn shows a negative effect on society also. Secondly, watching television not onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25619834711 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64343981569 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6122488506 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143415177092 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653159353366 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351166468871 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914328629776 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202409376057 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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